I admit that I nearly forgot about the Body Language Blogfest, hosted by Harley D. Palmer at Labotomy of a Writer. Thanks to Roland D. Yeomans for reminding me!
Below is my excerpt from Again, the Young Adult manuscript that I'm currently revising. I haven't spent much time revising the chapter that my excerpt is from, so please understand that it's still a work-in-progress (the self-conscious side of me needed that disclaimer). It was so hard to eliminate all the dialogue and only use body language!
[Excerpt has been removed to protect my work.]